Rhetorical Argument Thus Far

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During my research I actually mad some findings that really surprised me. As it turn out, the FAA actually did do something about the regulation of personal electronic devices while operating aircraft. I suppose my shock to my findings represent a great example of ethos. Much of my research came from news editorials, so they information was presented as new information at the time but the regulation has been in place since 2012. 

In addition to my findings, I became upset after the surprise lost its effect on me. I was not pleased with how the FAA regulated just airline pilots in terms of who can and cannot use tablets and other devices in flight for personal reasons. A distracted airline pilot is just as big a risk factor as a general aviation pilot would be. The fact that the FAA neglected to regulate all pilots throughout every branch of aviation behooves me! I focused the first half of my paper on that fact and expressed how I reacted, as the reader, to my sources information. The final half of my paper was a wind down of how the tablets have proven beneficial to the pilots so far. Many international airlines, like IndiGo, have successfully incorporated the Electronic Flight bag into their daily operations. Overall, I am satisfied with the paper so far. i would like to hear what feedback I get from other students as well as the writing center.